Comeback into the Flipping game
  • Hi guys,

    It's been a while for me but it seems that I have gotten the opportunity to make a comeback. I landed the job of writing the copy for an auction at a percentage of the winning bid.
    Take a look hereand see if you notice anything that I should change or could be better about it. Please be as critical as you feel like being!

    Thanks guys!

    Regards,
    Mark
    Post edited by Unknown User at 2011-03-08 15:56:07
  • Looks like the auction didn't meet the reserve. Too bad. The main issue I see from a buyer's perspective is that this could be a pretty "service" heavy business and in a slightly "shady" niche of verified craigslist accounts. Unfortunately that's an issue with the business model, not so much what you wrote for copy.